Last Poems!!

This week I'm doing "you fit into me." The author wrote it short and sweet but wanted it to be straight to the meaning. It's a similie; a two stanza two line short poem that makes up the entire simile. There's no puncuation and nothing is capitalized either. The other did this to put more meaning behind her poem. "you fit into me like a hook into an eye a fish hook an open eye" is the entire poem. Wheh I read this poem I cringe a fish hook in your eye would probably be one of the worst pains EVER!!!!!! OUCH!!!!! AH!!!!! Ok anyway, the author wants the reader to know that she's hooked on this person that hurts her to an unbelieveable level. She can't hwlp but love this person when all she wants in the entire world is to get rid of this fish hook in her open eye! The reason i believe this is because if you try to get the fish hook out of the eye; you're going to loose your frickin eye. She is pained so much and is going to lose so much from this "hook."